The 10th Planet Institute Of English Language

[شيزو]

The topic will be illustrated soon
:coffee1:

[شيزو]

will
the idea is as the following:
one of the members add a short paragraph contains mistakes in grammar or spelling or even in the technique of writing
and we correct the paragraph
so ?? who's in??

[شيزو]

so.........?

[سهاد]

Nice idea Schizo
Start it don't wait for other members

[شيزو]

thx 4 supporting me
the paragraph will be posted later on today god willing

thank u sohadoooo

[سُلاف]

will
the idea is as the following:
one of the members add a short paragraph contains mistakes in grammar or spelling or even in the technique of writing
and we correct the paragraph
so ?? who's in??

I'm in..

just tell me , when do we start ?

[شيزو]

any time my lil fairy
can u start first?
i hope so
:soso:

[سُلاف]

Ok .. I'll prepare some thing to start with

Also , I may insert some lessons and answer any question as well

[شيزو]

:soso::054:

[سُلاف]

You must find more than 5 mistakes ( grammar and spelling mistakes ) in these paragraphs
Depend on yourselves , please..



The pupils stoped talking as Miss Sarah entered the classroom. Then they stood up and said, “Good morning, teacher.” “I suppose you want to know my name” she said. But before she could tell them, someone in the class called out, “It’s Miss Sarah.” She opened her notbook and called their names in turn. When she came to the last name on the list, Kate , she noticed that Kate was been absent for over a month. “ What’s the matter with Kate ?” she asked looking up. “She’s in hospital Miss Sarah,” said one of the girls. “She’ve broken her leg.” “Has someone been to see her in hospital?” Miss Sarah asked. No one replied.
It was time to start the lesson. “Oh! Please tell us a story,” said one of the girls. “Very well,” Miss Sarah said. “But first of all I want everyone of you to write a letter to Kate . We’ll sent the best letters to cheer her up in hospital. After that I’ll tell you a story.”
After chooseing the best letters, Miss Sarah immediately sent them to Kate in the hospital. Kate spent a lovely time reading all the letters sent by her classmates.

[سُلاف]

I'm having difficulties with punctuations in this forum

[شيزو]

:heartbeat:You must find more than 5 mistakes ( grammar and spelling mistakes ) in these paragraphs
Depend on yourselves , please..



The pupils stoped talking as Miss Sarah entered the classroom. Then they stood up and said, “Good morning, teacher.” “I suppose you want to know my name” she said. But before she could tell them, someone in the class called out, “It’s Miss Sarah.” She opened her notbook and called their names in turn. When she came to the last name on the list, Kate , she noticed that Kate was been absent for over a month. “ What’s the matter with Kate ?” she asked looking up. “She’s in hospital Miss Sarah,” said one of the girls. “She’ve broken her leg.” “Has someone been to see her in hospital?” Miss Sarah asked. No one replied.
It was time to start the lesson. “Oh! Please tell us a story,” said one of the girls. “Very well,” Miss Sarah said. “But first of all I want everyone of you to write a letter to Kate . We’ll sent the best letters to cheer her up in hospital. After that I’ll tell you a story.”
After chooseing the best letters, Miss Sarah immediately sent them to Kate in the hospital. Kate spent a lovely time reading all the letters sent by her classmates.

thank u


i have the same punctuation problem

[شيزو]

so.........?? Any One Can Correct Theparagraph? Where Is Sir William??

[شيزو]

ياشباب تعليم انجليزي ببلاش

[مترقب]

i've got seven mistakes but i'm not sure about two

You must find more than 5 mistakes ( grammar and spelling mistakes ) in these paragraphs
Depend on yourselves , please..



The pupils stopped talking as Miss Sarah entered the classroom. Then they stood up and said, “Good morning, teacher.” “I suppose you want to know my name” she said. But before she could tell them, someone in the class called out, “It’s Miss Sarah.” She opened her notebook and called their names in turn. When she came to the last name on the list, Kate , she noticed that Kate has been absent for over a month. “ What’s the matter with Kate ?” she asked looking up. “She’s in hospital Miss Sarah,” said one of the girls. “She has broken her leg.” “Has someone been seeing her in hospital?” Miss Sarah asked. No one replied.
It was time to start the lesson. “Oh! Please tell us a story,” said one of the girls. “Very well,” Miss Sarah said. “But first of all I want everyone of you to write a letter to Kate . We’ll send the best letters to cheer her up in hospital. After that I’ll tell you a story.”
After choosing the best letters, Miss Sarah immediately sent them to Kate in the hospital. Kate spent a lovely time reading all the letters sent by her classmates.

[شيزو]

i've got seven mistakes but i'm not sure about two



NICE WORK MY FRIEND
??WAY ABOUT CRAMMER MISTAKES
??IS THERE ANY
THANKS FOR PARTICIPATE

[Outlandish]

I'm in

[شيزو]

so outlandish
corect مترقب
or try to corect me or the paragraph